Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 18 hours agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square17fedilinkarrow-up1225arrow-down16
arrow-up1219arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 18 hours agomessage-square17fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up4arrow-down1·14 hours agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down6·edit-213 hours agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·edit-212 hours agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down2·7 hours agoThank you captain obvious.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up1·32 minutes agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?