Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 16 hours agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square16fedilinkarrow-up1211arrow-down16
arrow-up1205arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 16 hours agomessage-square16fedilink
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down10·14 hours agoThat formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up4arrow-down1·12 hours agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down6·edit-211 hours agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·edit-210 hours agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down1·5 hours agoThank you captain obvious.
That formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.